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COME DANCE IN MY RAIN…

I wrote this way back in 2016. For no particular muse accept a novice practicing writing romantic poetry. 

I think it was a rainy night in Jozi…#tbt… Enjoy this tweeted up version 😉

COME DANCE IN MY RAIN…

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QB5OeEVOcGs

You’re like a rose

Graceful and prickly

Though you can be tricky

Who knows but I 

how to handle with care?

 

By all means not average

I’m not the type 

who’s neither here nor there

I’m present,

I’m here…

 

You expect perfection

You seem aloof, 

You’re mostly picky,

wildly passionate and compassionate,

It only makes sense 

that I would pick thee…

 

My intuition, 

In spite of your facade

Can easily perceive

emotions you try to hide,

My love is like wine

The more you taste

the more intoxicating…

 

Like notes from a rhyme

played through perfect timing

My affection like the red

Equates to soothing candles

spread all around the bed

Eliminating fears from playing

deep inside your head… 

 

Don’t say no, 

Instead be led

To the secrets of your garden

reflecting thru your eyes

Mirrored from the paradise

in mine…

 

You’re so damn fine, 

You are my earth 

I am your water 

You’re the fire burning 

in my love desire, 

Damsel oh my damsel

Let down your mane,

And come dance in my rain…

Copyright © 2016                   Bradley M. Tremmil

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  1. Wow What a comparison of love. It is as strong as real wine. With a refined taste and aroma.
    My love is like wine

    The more you taste

    the more intoxicating …
    I’m a romantic personality and this captivates me Thank you Bradley

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