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CAFFEINE'S: Something To See…

# Another TBT.                                                                                                                                                                                    Still vibing off Timbo’s creative genius.                                                                                                                                         Instead writing something new, I again decided to Me-mix another one of my older pieces.                                                   This revamp is also inspired by other collaborative associations.                                                                                               If I may say, some talent indeed…

SOMETHING TO SEE…

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xaOv4KNOC44

When beauty defies the gravity

of what holds us back

If we could clearly see

Love’s un-waning cry for help

Then perhaps we’d see

There’s no mystery to being,

Perhaps we’ll feel the levity to be

Just free to be

You and me,

Can you

Open your heart

to a new ability ever wooing in

As the atmosphere exudes tranquility

ever to be sentimental?  

Like aqua falls 

into morning dew 

If you open your hands

to these petals yearning for touch, 

Could you please be gentle,

with me?

When loneliness cries 

for passion’s high

Does not love’s appetite for harmony

reveal secretly the epiphany?

Is it not up to us 

to at least feel,

If we cannot clearly hear?

Perchance 

If we take a bite,

If we open our eyes 

You and me

Maybe,

Maybe you will see

There’s more than this moment

Much more to you and me,

To be are not, 

There’s something 

to see…

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCYj6DKJll4

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Written by Bradley Tremmil

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  1. You are no different to most humans.
    Not all thoughts and feelings are meant for all ears.
    I read somewhere that certain things are like precious pearls,
    and that wisdom advises discretion with regards to the point of investment.

    • You are no different to most humans.
      Not all thoughts and feelings are meant for all ears.
      I read somewhere that certain things are like precious pearls,
      and that wisdom advises discretion with regards to the point of investment.Report

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