Bradley Tremmil
ALL SMILES…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sweToqeI11U
Much ado they say
like what’s the fuss?
Much I do
I do like yay I say
Doth not I hath the keys
to open doors…
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All smiles
As in mine and yours,
You are you
And I am me
Yet I am you
And you are me
We are them
And they are us
Thus two or few are one
As in 1 & 1 has won…
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Your smile
is my smile
My smile
is your smile
Much I do
I do for smiles…
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All smiles
Hide not your light
Not even for a little while,
For smiles
All smiles
Expresses your smiles…
Copyright © 2020 Bradley M. Tremmil
A wonderful reminder to not let anyone steal our joy. Thank you.
Yes we always need to remind ourselves and others and this is how we share love and show that we care.
Absolutely and I appereciate this reminder.
You have your way of reminding us almost everyday. You and your talents are gifts to the world.
How kind, thank you for making me smile today.
Lol..
Well said, know that I agree with you. Poetry is subject to interpretation with this regard we can revel within Poetic Justice.
not having the key – interesting line
that you are one is interesting.
but what of the difference that brought you together in the beginning? is that lost?
Old English can be a bit tricky, – the meaning in this Ode is directly opposite to your interpretation.
The 3 dimensional philosophy of Oneness is both spiritual and emotional…guess what completes it?
Differences are always a lifetime of work in progress…
it is interesting, poetic vision doesn’t always convey.
Most times the essence of a line or text is lost in translation. When correctly interpreted it should have read as ‘Do I not have the keys to open doors?’.
From a tertiary POV the emphasis on punctuation would be an indicator of how to interpret a line or a text.
However, In this particular poetic phrase, the exclamation mark is of little or no importance because the main indicator is the word ‘doth’.
Right from the onset a question is being asked…
Does this make sense?
you are explaining your point well if that helps.
But poetry is an expression – as poets, we wish two things.
1. that the poem is read
2. that the words are honored and touch the reader
so we shouldn’t care if they took the words a new direction. We should stop and revel in the power of the words.