Be.YOU.tiful
(YOU BE YOU, I BE ME)
What makes beautiful, beautiful?
Like a flawless jewel
with no price tag
Is it the tangible
in the eyes of the beholder?
Maybe that winning rush
at the end of a race
Or what about the feeling
that you feel in
When something lost then found?
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How bout a trip around the world?
Perhaps dining on the French Riviera
where there’d be smiles and laughter
Thereafter painting the city wild
driven by a horse and chariot,
A champagne room with a view
having satin nights in Paris
To playing footie somewhere
on beach with jet black sand…
*
How about you,
You close your pretty eyes
Touch my fingertips
Pout your sexy lips,
Now dream of the paradise
waiting just for us…
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Oh-yeah
And what would make
beautiful, beautiful to me?
As the early dawn warms up to the sun
The feel in
with both my eyes on you
Being next to someone like you
Feeling like a bird up and away
just to be free to bee,
Honey you be you
And I be me…
Be.You.tiful is priceless!
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
Effective use of deconstruction
No schism by the rhythm.
Damn she’s beautiful me I’m dutiful.
Talking bout a bee unto a bird.
Beauty’s such a cutie how she spin my world.
Like rivers to the seas.
The girl she make me hear the music in the words.
Round and a round.
This is how we break-it-down.
Breaking something down is the essence of deconstruction
Another wonderful and romantic poem! Always a pleasure to read. 🙂
Thank Ellie. It’s always a pleasure to read your comment!
You have given us the essence of seeing the beauty, and the beauty itself, Bradley!
It’s so special!
Without the inspiration from the beauty I was just a vehicle without the fuel. Thank you Albert!
That’s a good parable, Bradley!
Thanks man! thank you for reading.
Beautiful lyrics. We all have that something, sometimes more than one thing if we are lucky to make us feel beautiful. Great poem Bradley.
Very true, we have much more than we know sometimes. Thank you Carol.
Another winner of a poem about love love love.
Love makes my world go round and around
Be.YOU.tiful is Beautiful. Thank you Elena!
Indeed! That’s all I can say! Keep that way! Lovely poem!