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BAREFOOT IN THE RAIN #tbt

Another #tbt revamped (or Me-mixed) plus 1 bonus.

BAREFOOT IN THE RAIN

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFppTBdCse8&list=RDKFppTBdCse8&start_radio=1 

Finest ever seen

Silky soft en sheen

The Cashmere white dress

compliments your skin,

Oh I see

My apology for rushing 

Is it not plain to see

That naturally 

Your outer comeliness

is just as lovely 

as the content within,

If I could have 1 wish

before a million more 

I will ask you to,

Let your hair fall precious,

Let me admire you

From your crown

all the way down to your feet,

Like twin all white doves

Take my hand Miss foxy lady

And step out in the rain

with me,

Barefoot princess, 

Let me spin you

Round and around

on your tippy-tippy toes

Till you feel the ting lings 

wow all over

inside & out,

No doubt

As I whisper the sweetest

words of poetry unheard,

An orchestra of music 

be slowly playing your name

While raindrops are softly 

falling on our heads,

Close your eyes 

to aqua adorning

Then your skin 

And my skin

Doing our thing,

Wouldn’t that be

something?

… 

You and me sugar…

Barefoot in the rain…

Copyright © 2016         Bradley M. Tremmil

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THE ART OF LOVE…

 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bm1_PciQxw

The art of war and love

is to know the difference

between what is war

and what is love…

 

When and with what

to war

And with whom

to Love and how…

 

We are all designed

to love passionately,

deeply & immensely

Notwithstanding to war

with purpose & skill,

 

It is a higher calling

to master the art…

Copyright © 2016          Bradley M. Tremmil

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    • Thank you Carol.
      Funny enough, I often get caught up with the words myself.
      They always seem to reveal something more profound afterwards.

      It’s almost as though they were written by another force.👼
      That’s why I need a lot of comedies to cool the mind off…hehehe

  1. That’s your innocent childlike nature speaking from within.
    This nature is suppressed by the cares of this world
    and ‘conservative maturity’.
    Don’t you feel exceptional free when you play with your kids and animals,
    When you’re outside with Mother nature,
    Especially barefoot in the rain?

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