AWE TO ME…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b-7gr8QvRbc
Amore’
When you water me
You’re awe to me,
More to me
Come water me…
Too drunk with dreams
or so it seems
When I’m hot like fire
I be drastic as a felon,
Best put me in water
lest I roar
Nicely ice me down
And let me quiver…
Cry me a river
from that fountain beyond
North to south
Let the rain fall down
as you walk on thru
the waters of my mind…
Ripply round
I love the sound
Amore’
Twice the spice
You’re awe to me
Out of depths from the wells
Come mist me
as soil blows coolness
from her mouth,
Yea be nice
like water from a melon…
Amore’
I do echo
Earth to Aqua
Lead me to your ocean
Where me be bronzed
dripping from my melanin…
Surfing on your potion
I adore mi amore
Oh how you’re awe to me
When you water me…
Copyright © 2019 Bradley M. Tremmil
Nice words………Water is essential to all life……….lovely meaning..
Thank you Pamela…Oh yes water certainly is as essential as the air we breathe.
Bradley my friend. Where do you get your inspiration from. Once again, your poetry leaves me breathless.
Hey Della.
It’s been a while. How are you doing?
My inspiration comes from life in general but mostly people, women in particular.
When I feel a creative vibe coming on I don’t try to control it anymore, I just let it be. It’s hard to logically explain cos it just happens when it chooses to.
And this piece right here was inspired by the Creator God. The experience was really-really awesome…
When you feel it inside, just surrender to the moment…
Thank you!!
I am great thanks, how are you?
I would love to hear more about the experience sometime. I seem to have some writers block. Haven’t written any poetry for a long time. Its good to know other artist’s perspective. Thanks
I have never felt better. Thank you.
Well good quality coffee always gets me going on the weekend.
And of course the day would not be the same without my music.
One of the most fascinating experiences for me is listening and feeling.
It’s the vibration of elements all around, especially somebody’s soul.
Even when a person is silent they are always saying something in their thoughts. Most often their body language interprets the unspoken.
More coffee more inspiration…
Lol I’ll keep that in mind…
You are really a poetic talent, my friend…..I really like it
Thank you. I am pleased that you like this piece.
your words recall alchemy, while the image is more 2001
The intention was more spiritual with a slight romantic vibe. Try to imagine travelling upward at the speed of light into outta space, then slowing your mind down to see neon rain falling.
This could be alchemy outside of gravity.
chemistry does behave differently outside of a gravity well
Earth to Aqua…nice one Bradley once again. Your talent is very inspirational. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and talents.
Aah thank you Carol. You are always too kind. And you are most welcome.
It is so true what I say. You are a talented person no doubt. Thank you again for always being you.
It is one of my greatest pleasures to inspire thru my art. Thank you.