Bradley Tremmil
A QUIET STORM…
Destination unknown
Caught up in a quiet storm
The Quiet storm
An acquired taste
This pleasure zone is an elated warm…
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Sure I see
what you see in me
Surely there’s a thing in you
What you bring to me
Sea to shore
Sure to see
Phenomenally it’s your poetry…
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Your poetry
A rhythmic floetry
Like flames right by the fireside
With every fibre in my being
I deem I’m rested in this dawn…
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Perfect timing
where the water falls
Like an orchestra wining n dining
Smooth n soft the waves are rhyming,
Shea delight basking in this sunshine
Tropical the island breeze
Sassy and classy
If it would rain now
we have the shelter
And as the day will melt away
The night begins to begins to fall…
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Deep in the night
Sailing to a destiny unknown
The sound of rain
is like lullaby rocking off to sleep
Elatedly warm
The moment to embrace
Caught up in a storm
Just let the nature take its place…
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
I am a very romantic person. This is magical poetry.
Thank you Iacho. I hope to write a lot more.
I sincerely wish you, we’ll wait for you to share it with us.
A beautiful romantic journey…your poems are as classy as Luther Vandross’ lovesongs ( I may be showing my age with that comparison)
Wow, Luther Vandross! he was in a class of his own. I don’t know if I can even come close. But I really appreciate that you can compare to such a legend. Thank you!!!
I agree completely with Paul. 🙂
Now I’m a little more than flattered. A respected humility. Thank you!
Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading that, thankyou.
Thank you Coffee Queen. Who knows, there may be a hot pot of coffee waiting on the fire, the morning after the storm
Such a wonderful post! Lovely words!
Thank you Ellie I’m glad you like it!
Thank you Carol. This cold-cold world needs to see more sunsets and feel a little romance.
Very romantic and beautiful. As always.