Bradley Tremmil
A Moment In Time…
It was bleu
It was me
Then came you,
With the moon full in bloom
The night all so bright,
It was a moment…
You were shy
So was I
You were broody
somewhat moody
But your beauty
Oh my cutie!
The eclipse on your lips
Was like the fleur of the romaunt…
Aah…
Like the same ole saying
Love is always better
the 2nd time around,
Every now and then
When the moon is full in blue
With not much effort to measure
There’s a treasure lost and found…
Deep in my sleep
Thru the light of the night
Hidden for so long
Beyond the fog
there were thistles,
Beyond the thorns
there were walls,
Behind your walls
I thinks I found the booty…
Last night in my dream
It was all of you
It was all of me,
A once in a blue moon
It was a moment,
A moment in time…
Copyright © 2017 Bradley M. Tremmil
You always give me beautiful pleasure every time I visit! Thank you Bradley!
What is life if don’t have moments of pleasure?
I agree with that important question, Bradley.
Wow you did bring back wonderful memories for me.
Your talent is amazing.
Thank you Carol, I’m happy to evoke good feelings. There is always a purpose for the talents that God has given us.
Some of my best moments was on top of a hill in the moonlight. This is spectacular, Bradley.
Thank you Della. I know that every amazing continent has its own unique beauty. However if you ever have a chance to visit Cape Town South Africa. To understand you would have to be there watching the sunset fade into night. You would need to be literally standing on top of the Lion’s Head and also the infamous Table Mountain. Mere words are not enough to express the poetry of the moment!
OH Wow!! A fellow South African? I have been to Cape Town only once before but didn’t have the change to go up Table Mountain. I can only imagine the experience, but will maybe be able to do that soon.
Yes I am South African. I’m a Durban born Natalian. I lived in Cape Town for a while and now I’m in Egoli Jozi. I don’t know whether I’m surprised or blown away that you’re a fellow citizen. I guess its a small world after all!!
Small world indeed. I am absolutely stumped to meet someone from my home here. I grew up in Kempton Park so know Jozi quite well. Maybe we can meet up sometime when I move back to Jhb.
That will be great!! Just let know when you’re back in town.
You’ve given voice to something many of us have felt in our lives.
Thank you Barbara. I am happy that my art has an impact. I trust that this brought back some good sentimental memories
Another spectacular poem Bradley 🙂
Thank you Paul. I always appreciate you comment
Great communication, made changes as requested. Thanks!
Good , thank you Yaqoob